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this is my half of an art trade with 
! MY VERY FIRST ART TRADE THAT I COMPLETED!! X3 ME IS SOOO HAPPY! and dont worrie im also working on my art trade with 
. be patient me it's almost done!! =3 and now to describe what ion the world i did in this picture!!X3
well, this is 0garrasgirl0's OC Altair and the redhead in da background is Sasori (from Naruto). so NONE of the characters in this are mine!!!...just wanted to make that clear... oh! and i apologise (cant spell to save my life here... TwT) for my scanner and it's habbit of wanting all my pictures ruined. aaaaaand the fact that i cant draw background to save my life... (*shrug* i tired). might as well describe that first since im talking about it. i had the feeling that Kazuku woulden't spend much money on the Akatsuki's lair so i guesed that the floor and walls would be very plain. but Altair tried to make the room a little more pleasent to look at. there's even a scroll with her name in katakana on the wall! (sorta since you cant write Altair in japanese very easily... it achally says something like Ariteri which is pernounced A-ri-tair-i... idk i tried *shrug*). and now for what's going on.... but just to make it fun! im gonna do it like it happened in my mind! cause i said so!! X3
~in my mind~
-outside Altair's room-
tobi: but wont Altair-sempai be mad if we tell her she only has 5 minutes to get ready for today's mission?
deidara: that's the point of a prank, tobi.-un it's funny.-un *smirks*
sasori:*smirk* I'll go wake her up.. *dissapears into Altair's room*
-30 seconds later-
Altair: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!! O.O *chucks covers off her as she runs for her door* waite! gotta get changed! *leaves door wide open as she starts to go through her cabnets for her Akatsuki cloak*
sasori: *leans in the doorway watching Altair franticly run around her room*
deidara: *laughing* that was GREAT!-un she opened the door and looked right at us but didnt even seem to know!!-un XD
tobi: but tobi dosen't find it funny...
deidara: *stares at tobi and then back to sasori* well, since ive seen her face, im gonna leave once she finds out that we perpously turned her alarmclock off.-un i dont wanna be around here when that happens.-un
sasori:*still watching Altair* whatever...
deidara:*turns and walks down the hallway*
tobi: *looks from sasori to deidara* WAITE FOR TOBI, SEMPAI!!! *runs after deidara*
Altair: LEADER-SAMA IS GONNA HAVE MY HEAD FOR BEING LATE!! *forgets that the door is opened and starts to change (her back is to sasori)*
sasori: O.O *on verge of anime nose bleed* (sasori is being such a perv right now.. X3) *regains composure* ach-hem...
Altair: *freezes in place* *looks back at sasori* how long have you been there?!!
sasori: *smirk* since you screamed "what"....
Altair: *looks away from saori* *blush*
~and im gonna end that here~
so in a short summary, deidara,sasori, and tobi decided to play a prank on Altair (yes, i know tobi dosent come in until after sasori dies but it's more fun when there together =3) and so turned her alarmclock off and woke her up only 5 minutes before there supose to go out on a mission and so Altair is freaking out and basically tears her room apart looking for stuffs only to shove it all back in her derwars (hence the blue peice of clothing sticking out). and dosent she look MAD!!! X3 I HAVE A FEELING SOMEONE GONNA DIIIIIE!! LOLZ i bet she would like to have a kunai in her hand right now instead of her headband.lolz and just look at sasori!! you gotta imagine how much he's smirking under his cloak. lolz!! well... i hope you've enjoyed this overy long artist comment!! I HOPE YOU LIKE IT 0garrasgirl!! X3 ENJOY!!
! MY VERY FIRST ART TRADE THAT I COMPLETED!! X3 ME IS SOOO HAPPY! and dont worrie im also working on my art trade with . be patient me it's almost done!! =3 and now to describe what ion the world i did in this picture!!X3well, this is 0garrasgirl0's OC Altair and the redhead in da background is Sasori (from Naruto). so NONE of the characters in this are mine!!!...just wanted to make that clear... oh! and i apologise (cant spell to save my life here... TwT) for my scanner and it's habbit of wanting all my pictures ruined. aaaaaand the fact that i cant draw background to save my life... (*shrug* i tired). might as well describe that first since im talking about it. i had the feeling that Kazuku woulden't spend much money on the Akatsuki's lair so i guesed that the floor and walls would be very plain. but Altair tried to make the room a little more pleasent to look at. there's even a scroll with her name in katakana on the wall! (sorta since you cant write Altair in japanese very easily... it achally says something like Ariteri which is pernounced A-ri-tair-i... idk i tried *shrug*). and now for what's going on.... but just to make it fun! im gonna do it like it happened in my mind! cause i said so!! X3
~in my mind~
-outside Altair's room-
tobi: but wont Altair-sempai be mad if we tell her she only has 5 minutes to get ready for today's mission?
deidara: that's the point of a prank, tobi.-un it's funny.-un *smirks*
sasori:*smirk* I'll go wake her up.. *dissapears into Altair's room*
-30 seconds later-
Altair: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!! O.O *chucks covers off her as she runs for her door* waite! gotta get changed! *leaves door wide open as she starts to go through her cabnets for her Akatsuki cloak*
sasori: *leans in the doorway watching Altair franticly run around her room*
deidara: *laughing* that was GREAT!-un she opened the door and looked right at us but didnt even seem to know!!-un XD
tobi: but tobi dosen't find it funny...
deidara: *stares at tobi and then back to sasori* well, since ive seen her face, im gonna leave once she finds out that we perpously turned her alarmclock off.-un i dont wanna be around here when that happens.-un
sasori:*still watching Altair* whatever...
deidara:*turns and walks down the hallway*
tobi: *looks from sasori to deidara* WAITE FOR TOBI, SEMPAI!!! *runs after deidara*
Altair: LEADER-SAMA IS GONNA HAVE MY HEAD FOR BEING LATE!! *forgets that the door is opened and starts to change (her back is to sasori)*
sasori: O.O *on verge of anime nose bleed* (sasori is being such a perv right now.. X3) *regains composure* ach-hem...
Altair: *freezes in place* *looks back at sasori* how long have you been there?!!
sasori: *smirk* since you screamed "what"....
Altair: *looks away from saori* *blush*
~and im gonna end that here~
so in a short summary, deidara,sasori, and tobi decided to play a prank on Altair (yes, i know tobi dosent come in until after sasori dies but it's more fun when there together =3) and so turned her alarmclock off and woke her up only 5 minutes before there supose to go out on a mission and so Altair is freaking out and basically tears her room apart looking for stuffs only to shove it all back in her derwars (hence the blue peice of clothing sticking out). and dosent she look MAD!!! X3 I HAVE A FEELING SOMEONE GONNA DIIIIIE!! LOLZ i bet she would like to have a kunai in her hand right now instead of her headband.lolz and just look at sasori!! you gotta imagine how much he's smirking under his cloak. lolz!! well... i hope you've enjoyed this overy long artist comment!! I HOPE YOU LIKE IT 0garrasgirl!! X3 ENJOY!!
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YOU'RE THE BEST!
i stll have a little more to do on yours. but trust me, it'll be on before the weekend is done.
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I'm a WOLF. not a DOG. a WOLF. notice the tail, claws, fangs, and the golden eyes. but yet... I'm still fluffy. =3
WHO'S YOUR DANNA?!! (sorry, i couldn't help it... X3)
I STILL have issues with the eyes . . . but it's not so bad in this picture. Also the one leg seems a little messed up . . . I can't tell if she's wearing a skirt or pants or whatever . . . and the shoulder on the same side needs some help. In my opinion, it's jus a little too wide and it sticks out a bit too far, making the arm seem kind of awkward, maybe even a little limp and useless. And the hand attached to that looks awkward as well, but I can't draw hands either so . . . no advice there. The blush on her face is too "hard". You need to use "softer" lines.
I'm not sure if anyone else uses these terms, but for me, hard lines are really sharp, blunt lines, and soft lines are gentler, curvier lines.
Onto Sasori:
The arms are too long or the legs are too short or something, but that part really sticks out to me. And the sleeve on the hand that's leaning against the door sticks out to much. Kind of hard to explain that one, but it should be hanging down a little more.
However, I will never understand how you manage to color in the hair that well. I can't do it, no matter how hard I try ><
And I can tell you put some effort into the background details. The walls are a little blank, but I'm the only person who actually notices things like that anyway so . . . you're good.
This is the kind of sutff you get when you ask for me to critic. I notice pretty much EVERYTHING.
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sasori:
i guess i can agree on the leg are thing somewhat, as for the sleve i just sort of "winged it", yes i do suck at backgrounds, and thanks for critisizing my work! ^w^
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I'm a WOLF. not a DOG. a WOLF. notice the tail, claws, fangs, and the golden eyes. but yet... I'm still fluffy. =3
WHO'S YOUR DANNA?!! (sorry, i couldn't help it... X3)
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